Well, I have taken this off because I am now paranoid about people stealing my work. Too bad. Is there a place that I can put this without undue risk?

Unfortunately, I did not read all of it, but from what I did read, it seems pretty good. It seems like a classic plot, but that never hurts.

 

Though I don't suggest you put so much of your novel on a website. The plot, characters and even that part of the novel could be stolen.

Hi Huntershaw!

 

I did not have time to read - only catch your post, and I wanted to let you know that the Iluminators have a writing group working on a World Building project, the Scribes Chapterhouse has a few different things going on, and for registered users, there is a Critique Circle that protects your material from being stolen. So check them out! We are always looking for writers! I'll get a chance to read your stuff later!

 

Wes