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filled out all m official paperses and stuff I need for moi NZ school certificates to be acknowledged as German Abitur this morning though, so yay me clearing away procrastination stuffs

filled out all m official paperses and stuff I need for moi NZ school certificates to be acknowledged as German Abitur this morning though, so yay me clearing away procrastination stuffs

 

yay :)

 

IT WORKS! IT WORKS!

 

HAHA IT WORKS!

Have you built a time machine?

 

 

not yet. But I can start, stop and continue a sound file in my project

 

 

 

IT WORKS! IT WORKS!

 

HAHA IT WORKS!

Have you built a time machine?

not yet. But I can start, stop and continue a sound file in my project

That's always good too :)

 


 

My favorite has always been the Gary Provost lesson on varying sentence length to create rhythm and flow

This sentence has five words. Here are five more words. Five-word sentences are fine. But several together become monotonous. Listen to what is happening. The writing is getting boring. The sound of it drones. It’s like a stuck record. The ear demands some variety. Now listen. I vary the sentence length, and I create music. Music. The writing sings. It has a pleasant rhythm, a lilt, a harmony. I use short sentences. And I use sentences of medium length. And sometimes, when I am certain the reader is rested, I will engage him with a sentence of considerable length, a sentence that burns with energy and builds with all the impetus of a crescendo, the roll of the drums, the crash of the cymbals–sounds that say listen to this, it is important.

 

Banana banana banana banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana.

Banana. Banana banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana. Banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana.

Banana. Banana banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana. Banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana. Banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana banana.

 

that last line got me.

 

right in the feels

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