If we keep this up it might just stand a chance.

What do I have to talk about...

My back is hurting.

I annotated the first few pages of Tal's story.

It's pretty good.

I like the names.

He makes good ones.

The king's name was particularly fitting in my opinion.

And his story is only about 47 pages long so far so it shouldn't take me too long except that I'm taking it in chunks and doing my best to annotate thoroughly and even making some efforts to help flesh it out.

Great story line.

I haven't made it far but I can see great potential for character development.

I have yet to start reading his friends story.

I plan on annotating both.

Whenever I write books I always end up trying to get people to read them.

Feedback can be an amazingly useful thing.

I have been annotating with a nice light blue color.

Though not as good as a light green would be.

I have slight synthesia.

However you spell it.

So I actually see light green when I a relaxed.

A flash of it.

The first time it happened I thought the world changed and it made me panic.

It was a pretty weird day.

Make that week.

But it was also years ago.